C.N+You+may+fail,+but+fall+still+fighting

The image below is a picture of the Civil Rights Movement Timeline. The Civil Rights Movement was a period in time that many will never forget because it was what initiated and helped achieve racial desegregation and equality.This picture helps illustrate my understanding of the line by providing a visual representation that explains the concept in the line. In this timeline are key events that occurred during the Civil Rights Movement sequentially. Throughout these events people would always put the African Americans down and try their hardest to prevent them from reaching their goal. The majority of the nation was against them but every time they were put down they got right back up and continued fighting to reach their dream. With the insight that I have just provided you with you can now see that, you may fail but never stop fighting because in this scenario even though the entire nation was constantly putting the African Americans down they never stopped fighting to reach their dream which has positively impacted the lives that African Americans have now.

Nice job explaining the poem in a very different but appropriate way. (Better proofreading is important, though.) Do you like the line itself? Why?